July 2013 - The Y Logs

Yzabel / July 30, 2013

Review: Gateway to Reality

Gateway to Reality by Becca J. Campbell

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

Talented artists shouldn’t be waiting tables, scraping by, and living mediocre lives. But that’s exactly what art school graduate Wes Teague is doing.

Then he wakes from a bizarre dream, haunted by the sense that his life isn’t real. A harrowing truth presents itself–the real world lies in his dreams, not when he’s wide awake.

The dream world he enters each night is rich and vibrant. Chicago appears the same on the surface, but chaos runs rampant as gravity, physics, and other laws of nature become fluid, changing unexpectedly. There, Wes’s parents, brother, and sister are strangers. His girlfriend Emily doesn’t recognize him. Wes longs to return, to unlearn the truth about his dual reality.

Wes would sacrifice almost anything to get back to blissful ignorance in a false world.

But now he has feelings for the real Emily.

Review:

(Book provided by the author through ReadIt & Reap 172 in the Shut Up & Read group, in exchange for an honest review.)

The concept of blurred boundaries, of realities that aren’t what they seem, is something that I’ve always found quite fascinating. So, of course, I couldn’t let this one pass me by. “Gateway to Reality” left me with mixed feelings, though, and it’s not easy for me to give it a proper rating.

The story kept me wanting to read more, and delve deeper into the mystery of what’s supposed to be the “real world”: not the one we know, but one called the Existence, in people simply… exist, and where everything is possible, from building items to rooms to whole pocket-worlds, and more. It gave me a few things to ponder, starting with the necessity of having an “escape world” to go to, and how such a world can turn out to be addictive and dangerous in its own way. Besides, it also questions the human nature itself: would we be truly happy in a place where we can do and be absolutely whatever we want, or do we actually need limits for our own good? Existence and Logiverse clearly represented two extreme visions (total freedom vs. a world defined by rules), and both had their pros and cons. The fact that some people went back time and again to the LV opened a vast array of issues of its own.

The downside for me, however, was that in turn, I found the characters less compelling and defined. Wes seems to accept everything at face value, or almost, when I thought he’d be in more denial at first, or would try and find out more, in more drastic ways than he did. The book had a potential of really blurring reality and virtual existence, but it didn’t quite do the trick. Maybe I was expecting a twist or two at some point, too. A few elements, too, felt like they weren’t exploited. The black holes sucking people in, for instance (although there’s one moment, at the end, where a clue might be provided—but that one was planned, whereas the others seemd random occurrences). Why was Wes so concerned about Emily and not about Wendy, whom he saw vanishing in such a hole (after all, in both cases, those characters weren’t the ones he knew in what he believed at first to be his real world)? In fact, too many (all?) characters accept things as they are, and don’t question what should be a huge question mark hanging above everyone’s heads.

I guess my problem, indeed, is that I would’ve wanted more of those subplots to be tackled here, instead of Wes chasing after Emily the way he did. Their story might have been more enjoyable if it had developed in the second installment (since this looks like a series). I kept hoping for more, that never came. This said, I enjoyed the book nevertheless, for its world and all its yet-to-come possibilities.

Yzabel / July 29, 2013

Review: Fire Country

Fire Country by David Estes

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

In a changed world where the sky bleeds red, winter is hotter than hell and full of sandstorms, and summer’s even hotter with raging fires that roam the desert-like country, the Heaters manage to survive, barely.

Due to toxic air, life expectancies are so low the only way the tribe can survive is by forcing women to procreate when they turn sixteen and every three years thereafter. It is their duty as Bearers.

Fifteen-year-old Siena is a Youngling, soon to be a Bearer, when she starts hearing rumors of another tribe of all women, called the Wild Ones. They are known to kidnap Youngling girls before the Call, the ceremony in which Bearers are given a husband with whom to bear children with.

As the desert sands run out on her life’s hourglass, Siena must uncover the truth about the Wild Ones while untangling the web of lies and deceit her father has masterfully spun.

Review:

(Book provided by the author through ARR #118 in the We ♥ YA Books! group, in exchange for an honest review.)

A solid 3.5 stars for this one.

It took me a few pages to get used to Siena’s voice; however, it quickly grew on me, and soon I found myself quite appreciating it. She sounds authentic, with a unique voice, and her own way of viewing the world, even though she’s struggling here against beliefs hammered into her since childhood.

The world depicted by David Estes is frightening in itself. It immediately conjured in my mind pictures of a burning sun, of deserts, of tribes trying to scrape a living with few resources in the little time they had (thirty, thirty-five years, maybe fourty at the very most?). In that regard, the role of women as Bearers—or, rather, as “breeders”—totally made sense, although it’s a concept that scares me personnally. I really wouldn’t want to find myself in such a situation, having to face such prospects.

The plot is woven progressively, from day-to-day life to discoveries and challenges, in a coming-of-age story interspersed with hints of darker secrets. I also appreciated that there was no love triangle here—those are becoming so common, and for no reason except “it sells”, in way too many YA novels these days! The budding love between Siena and Circ, growing from “childhood friends” to “souls calling to each other, but forbidden to meet”, felt completely natural, and this was great.

On the other hand, it may be because the book is the only first one in the series, and more will be explained later on, but I kept having a feeling of “pocket universe”. I admit I’m still not sure whether the Fire Country is made up of several tribes scattered in several villages, or of one, big village that, considering the amount of people involved, would actually be more of a large town. This was a bit confusing, as if there were at once too many people and not enough.

I was a bit perplexed at the overall picture, too. Why did Roan act the way he did? We may never know if it was out of selfish desire, or if he had other schemes in mind, but couldn’t bear them to fruition nor tell anyone about them. I wondered also what was the whole deal with the Ice Country as well as the Glassies. The Fire Country people were described as quite backwards, like a tribe with very basic tools and weapons, and I didn’t understand what kind of interest the Glassies may have in them. (Having read the Dwellers saga, I feel safe in my knowledge of who *they* are, and perhaps this is why I couldn’t really understand?) Knowing the author’s skills in weaving his stories over several volumes, I suspect answers will be brought sooner or later. Yet I still think this may be perceived as a weakness by other readers.

Conclusion: Definitely a good beginning to a series, but I hope the following books bring more answers.

Yzabel / July 28, 2013

Review: Broken Elements

Broken Elements by Mia Marshall

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

“It’s happening again, Aidan. We didn’t stop it, after all.”

As an elemental, Aidan Brook holds the power of water at her fingertips. A descendant of the earth’s oldest magic, she can cause tides to ebb and flow, put out house fires without calling 911, and give anyone who’s annoying her an impromptu shower.

But even her magic has its limits. After it fails her one terrible night, she hides from the world and everyone she once loved, trying to escape the memories that haunt her. Ten years later, her exile is brought to an abrupt end when her former best friend appears on her front porch. An elemental killer is once again murdering her friends, and she must return to the scene of her own crimes.

Lake Tahoe proves more than she bargained for. Between a sadistic killer, some clever FBI agents, an annoyingly attractive landlord, and way too many new roommates, she has a pretty full plate. Add in a past she’s desperate to escape and her own uncontrollable powers, and Aidan Brook is having a very, very bad month.

Review:

3.5 stars. “Broken Elements” reads fast and with ease. While elemental powers are nothing new in itself, they were woven into the story in a seamless way that made sense.

I really liked the relationship between Aidan and Sera, and their interactions that were sometimes bumpy, but always speaking of their underlying affection for each other. The downside was maybe that compared to these two, the other characters seemed a little flat, less defined—albeit still enjoyable (I quite liked Simon’ behaviour). I also appreciated that the romantic interest was woven in gradually, and didn’t end up in full-blown eternal-love-at-first-sight: there’s still room for evolution in it, that will hopefully span over the next book(s), and this seems more natural to me than the contrary.

The author took care of avoiding info-dumps as much as possible; however, there still was a big one in the first chapters, which seemed a bit forced. I was also left dubious about the involvement of some of the human characters (no names here, to avoid spoiler), who I expected would have been more suspicious after the revelation of elemental powers: after all, it was the girls’ word against their meager knowledge, so how would they be sure said girls told the whole truth? Finally, I thought that sometimes, the characters reacted a little too much like “young” people: they have lived for several decades, so I’d expect more wisdom from them. (But this is something that I always find tricky in books dealing with older-than-they-seem and/or immortal characters; it’s clearly not an easy job to do.)

All in all, though, I still enjoyed this story, and will very likely pick the next volume to learn more about the world and characters presented in the first one.

Yzabel / July 26, 2013

Review: Angel on the Ropes

Angel on the Ropes by Jill Shultz

My rating: [rating=2]

Summary:

Dazzling trapeze artist Amandine Sand leads a perilous double life. Will her secret—and her choices—save her planet or ruin it?

Amandine walks a high wire between two lives—hobbled by a life-threatening secret. She’s one of the spotted humans wrongly accused of being a plague carrier. These “leopards” are hunted by zealots to protect their offworld colony from the scourge. Despite this threat, Amandine spends her days guiding other leopards to an underground shelter run by the pacifist Seekers. At night, with her own spots hidden, she takes to the air, the one place this extraordinary artist feels free and gloriously alive.

When the persecution of leopards explodes into widespread violence, the Seekers demand more of her time. But her circus is teetering toward bankruptcy and desperately needs her, too. She has no time to breathe… and then she meets a stranger who leaves her breathless. And might just be the biggest risk of all. If her trust is misplaced and she’s unmasked, everyone she loves—and everything she’s fought for—could crash.

Now she must make an irrevocable leap. Without a net.

To survive, Amandine must draw upon everything she’s learned from the circus and Seekers and summon the courage to reveal her true colors. But can a pacifist defend her violent enemies to stop a civil war? And can this reluctant angel fly beyond her limits to save her life, her love, and her world?

Review:

(I got this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.)

2.5 stars. I enjoyed some parts of the story, but others almost made me give up at times, especially in the beginning (not enough for me to drop the book, though).

The circus routines are described in marvellous ways, and I found it easy to picture them, even though I’m not too familiar with such performances. They didn’t seem repetitive either, and I could feel that the author had done her research and put a lot of care into making her readers *be* in the audience, rather than remain distanciated readers.

The world presented in the book is also a complex one—a very peculiar colony (more a Dyson sphere than a traditional solar system) with its various classes and problems. However, things were a little confusing at first regarding those, and it took me some time to understand what Titans or Seekers really were; although the author introduced all those in such a way as to avoid info-dumping (which is good),

What constituted the biggest problem for me with “Angel on the Ropes” was that the plot seemed to end up dwarfed and rushed at some point. It started with concepts such as leopards (people born with spots on their skins) being hunted down and killed by Plaguellants (religious extremists who believe said leopards are responsible for a terrible illness). Around the 40% mark, it then moved to something much more complex, involving a very flawed healthcare system in which people have to gamble in casinos in order to have some of of their organs healed—winning means receiving cures, losing means getting indentured, sometimes for years. Another subplot involved a species imported from Earth, with the potential of totally thwarting the local ecosystem. All of those collided into something pretty complex, and I felt that they would have deserved more development. As it is, the story seemed rushed in parts, with too many others left in the dark, or dropped along the way.

The ending especially made me feel let down. While I understand what it tried to achieve (and this was a beautiful lesson), it didn’t solve the aforementioned subplots. It also made some characters appear as they had taken a U-turn that may have happened, sure, but only later, with more “meat” and reasons in between, so to say. I kept waiting for more, and “more” didn’t happen.

I don’t know if this is the beginning of a series, or a standalone book. If there’s a second volume on its way, it could explain why some subplots were left aside for now, but I’m not sure.

Yzabel / July 25, 2013

Review: The Light Ages

The Light Ages by Ian R. MacLeod

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

Magnificent dark fantasy set in a steampunk milieu, The Light Ages reimagines Industrial Age England transformed by magic, as two lovers find themselves on opposite sides of a violent class struggle that could destroy their world

The discovery of aether changed everything; magic mined from the ground, it ushered in an Industrial Age seemingly overnight, deposing kings and rulers as power was transferred to the almighty guilds. Soon, England’s people were separated into two distinct classes: those who dug up and were often poisoned by the miraculous substance, and those who profited from it.

Robert Borrows has always wanted more than the life of poverty and backbreaking toil into which he was born. During a visit with his mother to an isolated local manor, he discovers Annalise, the beautiful and mysterious changeling whom aether has magically remolded into something more than human. Years later, their paths will cross again in the filthy, soot-stained streets of London, where Robert preaches revolution while Annalise enjoys the privileges afforded to the upper class—the same social stratum that Robert is trying to overthrow. But even as they stand on opposite sides of the great struggle that divides their world, they are united by a shocking secret from their childhood. And their destinies will be forever entwined when their world falls to ruin.

The Light Ages continues with The House of Storms, set one century later.

Review:

(I got this book from NetGalley, in exchange for a honest review.)

There’s quite interesting world-building here, and I really liked discovering what the author developed in “The Light Ages”. An England dominated by Guilds, owing their rank and power thanks to the mysterious aether and how it made spells and progress possible. “Changelings”, people affected by aether to such an extent that they start developing odd features and end up locked in asylums, or being experimented upon. The very Victorian contrasts of classes, of haves and have nots, of high-standing in society and extreme poverty. The prose describing all those aspects was also often beautiful, and reminiscent of past writins.

Some parts of the book had definite echoes of Great Expectations, yet with a much bleaker take on it, and as such, I felt that no matter what, the ending would be a bittersweet one. Contrary to it’s title, it’s the kind of story where hopes, as noble as they are, just seem doomed to be squashed; and even when dreams are actually fulfilled, it’s always with a tinge of sadness, and sacrifices to be made. I’d recommend it to people who don’t mind their steampunk to be of the grittier kind.

What I liked less were the characters themselves. I found the narrator too passive to my liking, letting himself be carried away by events, and it’s not before way into said events that he finally starts to take things into his hands… somehow. The same problem happened with other characters: significant happenings tended to be drowned between long introspective passages, people weren’t so well defined, and as a result, getting attached to anyone else in the story was hard. The world was more interesting to me than the people evolving in it, and this prevented me from enjoying the book as much as I wanted.

Yzabel / July 21, 2013

Review: Foreverland Is Dead

Foreverland is Dead by Tony Bertauski

My rating: [rating=4]

Summary:

Six teenage girls wake with no memories. One of them is in a brick mansion, her blonde hair as shiny as her shoes. The others are in a cabin, their names tagged to the inside of their pants. Their heads, shaved. Slashes mark the cabin wall like someone has been counting.

Hundreds of them.

There’s wilderness all around and one dead adult. The girls discover her body rotting somewhere in the trees. As the weeks pass, they band together to survive the cold, wondering where they are and how they got there. And why.

When an old man arrives with a teenage boy, the girls learn of a faraway island called Foreverland where dreams come true and anything is possible. But Foreverland is dead. In order to escape the wilderness, they’ll have to understand where they are.

More importantly, who they are.

Review:

(I got this book from the author himself, in exchange for a honest review.)

I read The Annihilation of Foreverland about one year ago; as a result, I was easily interested in knowing what happened next, and getting another side of the story. One of the very good sides of this second book is that you don’t have to read the first to understand and be pulled into the plot: since the characters wake up with most of their memories missing, the reader gets to discover everything along with them. On the other hand, if you enjoyed the “first volume”, you may find yourself wanting to read it again. At least, I did.

A warning, though: pay attention to details. No, really. Including names, for starters. This book is packed with little things here and there that aren’t so noticeable at first, but completely make sense once you reach the end. It’s not the kind of story you can afford to keep one eye on while doing something else on the side, because if you do, you’ll miss on something important, sooner or later, and find the plot “confusing”.

“Foreverland Is Dead” was quite the page-turner for me. Even though I knew the basics from the first part, I still enjoyed re-discovering the setting from the girls’ point of view. The relationships between those characters were interesting in more than one way: while apparently simple (the bad girl, the tentative leader, the one who does the cooking…), they actually go deeper than that, and not everything is what it seems. We’re taken into the plot mostly through Cyn’s and Miranda’s eyes, and as secrets unfold, so does the ugliness of human souls, once confronted to a situation threatening to go on for much longer than expected. The girls know they have to stand united in order to survive, yet they’re truly, only human, make mistake, and sometimes their darker side gets the best of them… for some more than for others. However, those who manage to overcome said dark side and fac their fears appear the braver for it.

I give FiD 4 to 4.5 stars. The one thing I wasn’t too sure about was, in fact, the writing style itself, often consisting of short sentences, which in turn sometimes makes it look jambled in places. Overall, it works for such a story, mirroring the girls’ confusion and how the world around them doesn’t make much sense; yet it might have the potential to bother readers who favour a more flowery style.

Yzabel / July 17, 2013

Review: Real Vampires Don’t Sparkle

Real Vampires Don’t Sparkle by Amy Fecteau

My rating: [rating=1]

Summary:

Matheus Taylor didn’t ask to be murdered.

To be fair, the percentage of people actually asking to be murdered is probably small enough to be safely ignored, but he felt it was worth stating regardless.

His life might have been ordinary, but it was his life and he wasn’t done with it yet. Quin didn’t care. A seventeen-hundred old Roman, Quintus Livius Saturnius had a different view of morality than most people. Killing Matheus and hijacking his undead existence seemed perfectly acceptable to him.

Now, Matheus spends his nights running for his life, questioning his sexual orientation, and defying a mysterious new threat to the vampires within his city. Not that he set out to do any defying; he just wanted to be left alone.

Unfortunately, that was never going to happen.

Review:

(I got this book from NetGalley, in exchange for a honest review.)

There are good ideas in this novel, but I think it’s in need of serious editing and cutting for the story to become more interesting. While there was some humour in it, and a few dialogue lines that made me smile, things tended to go on for too long in between plot points, without necessarily providing information and/or character growth. It made me feel like the story was dragging on, and in turn, I had a hard time pushing myself to read it.

The characters have their interesting sides, and some dialogues had a nice dynamics—what can I say, I like a dose of healthy snark. On the other hand, too often they behaved like drama queens, with a lot of pouting, glaring and other behaviours I’d associate to teenage girls rather than to grown-up men, especially when those are supposed to have lived for centuries and be all badass otherwise. Matheus struck me as childish most of the time, and only in the very last part did he seem to partly grow out of this. I expected Quin to be less patient with his antics, and show him things the hard way, instead of letting him pout and whine, with the occasional outburst. (Same with Alistair, who in my opinion should have been old enough to get over it.) Not to mention that Quin kept too much to himself, which led to Matheus not understanding, demanding answers, being denied them, throwing a tantrum, then dropping the matter—only to run after Quin when the latter went out to do something dangerous.

As for the plot itself, it’s quite hard to define. It was partly too full (the hunters, Zeb’s book, Milo’s role, Bianca, the ‘real bad guys’…), and yet at the same time went too slowly, being glazed over in favour of what I might called “filling up”. Also, in the end, several things remained to be solved. Was there a traitor? Why did Quin claim Matheus, what prompted him to turn him instead of just murdering him? Perhaps this story would have fared better if divided between two books, and with less bantering in between turning points. For instance, Matheus discovering the world of vampires, going on his first hunts, being confronted to Grigori and the others, and to the hunters, would’ve made a complete story in itself. The way things were, I found those aspects weren’t explored enough, and left too much room instead to those behaviours I mentioned above—which sure didn’t fit well with what the title had led me to expect.

It looks like this is the first volume, and another one will follow, hopefully bringing answers. However, I’m still convinced it would’ve fared better with more editing, even if this meant going with two books instead of the one. The war mentioned in the last third would really deserve its own story, set apart from the rest—or be made the main plot from the beginning, without all the interruptions in between.

Yzabel / July 11, 2013

Review: DiSemblance

DiSemblance by Shanae Branham

My rating: [rating=2]

Summary:

Jason Tanner’s life has always been different from the ordinary citizen’s. It started when he was an infant and his parents were only teenagers. A computer science prodigy, Lloyd attended MIT but left a pariah in the eyes of the school’s dean—but a computer physics genius in the eyes of his primary investor. Then his theories and ideas created a holographic machine and their world shrunk as contact with the outside world became less and less frequent. A computer prodigy now himself, Jason is about to learn that the world never waits for you if you have the ability to change it: it will come for you.

Detective Bruce Durante has been handed the case of the Comfort Killer, a serial killer so named because he appears to abduct terminally ill patients before returning their corpses to their families in refrigerated coffins. When he picks up the trail, it leads straight to the home of Lloyd Tanner.

Jason has been living life through the world of Lloyd’s invention and wishing he could carry on a relationship with Boston, the beautiful girl next door. When his father is murdered and framed as the Comfort Killer, he is brought back to reality in a hurry. He is forced to destroy all of the planted evidence—and finds he is being targeted as the killer’s new fall guy. But the secrets of his father’s invention run deep and Jason, his brother Isaac,Boston, the Comfort Killer, and Detective Durante hurtle towards one another on a deadly collision course that leaves everyone’s life hanging in the balance.

Review:

(Book provided by the author through ARR #110 in the We ♥ YA Books! group, in exchange for an honest review.)

I’m having a hard time writing this review, because I’d like to rate the book a little higher, but am not sure I should. In all fairness, I’d give the idea and story a solid 4 stars, but I wasn’t too thrilled about the writing itself.

“DiSemblance” is a story that you need to pay attention to. Don’t read it in a packed train, or juggling several things at once. It contains a lot of little details that are easy to miss if you’re not focused, and that are the very ones which help you puzzle everything back together. The author definitely did a good job at blurring the boundaries here, and more than once you’ll find yourself frowing at some plot point, reading back and wondering if there was a mistake… and no, there wasn’t, everything’s working according to plan. There’s a point after which things become clear, and in hindsight what happened in the first part of the book suddenly makes total sense; and yet, even then, you keep on wondering what’s true and what isn’t, what’s part of reality and what’s make-believe. In that, I’ll recommend this book if you like being bounced back from clue to clue without knowing clearly whether you’ve read those the right way or not. It’s got quite an exciting quality.

Unfortunately, I had a harder time with the style and pacing. There’s a lot of short chapters and sentences that give a jumbled feeling to the text as a whole, as well as what I’d deem “telling” about the characters and their actions rather than really showing them, which I found distracting (and as I said right above, this isn’t the kind of story where you can allow to let yourself be distracted). Also, connecting with the characters proved difficult. They’re interesting in their own ways, but with things moving so fast, I felt like we were only grazing at the surface, and as a result, I didn’t empathize with Bruce, Lisa, Jason or Boston as much as I would’ve liked to. Part of this might be related to how limits between reality and virtual world(s) keep shifting—we never know if we’re dealing with the real person or not—but I’m not sure it’s the only, nor the main reason.

In terms of plot, the ideas explored within this novel, as well as how the author manages to carry us from beginning to end, are great. But I think it would benefit from more editing, to make it easier to focus on the story.

Yzabel / July 8, 2013

Review: Her Ladyship’s Curse

Her Ladyship’s Curse by Lynn Viehl

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

In a steampunk version of America that lost the Revolutionary War, Charmian (Kit) Kittredge makes her living investigating magic crimes and exposing the frauds behind them. While Kit tries to avoid the nobs of high society, as the proprietor of Disenchanted & Co. she follows mysteries wherever they lead.

Lady Diana Walsh calls on Kit to investigate and dispel the curse she believes responsible for carving hateful words into her own flesh as she sleeps. While Kit doesn’t believe in magic herself, she can’t refuse to help a woman subjected nightly to such vicious assaults. As Kit investigates the Walsh family, she becomes convinced that the attacks on Diana are part of a larger, more ominous plot—one that may involve the lady’s obnoxious husband.

Sleuthing in the city of Rumsen is difficult enough, but soon Kit must also skirt the unwanted attentions of nefarious deathmage Lucien Dredmore and the unwelcome scrutiny of police Chief Inspector Thomas Doyle. Unwilling to surrender to either man’s passion for her, Kit struggles to remain independent as she draws closer to the heart of the mystery. Yet as she learns the truth behind her ladyship’s curse, Kit also uncovers a massive conspiracy that promises to ruin her life—and turn Rumsen into a supernatural battleground from which no one will escape alive.

Review:

[I got an ARC of this book through NetGalley.]

Great world-building, revealed little bits by little bits and not through huge info-dumps, as the heroine faces the various circumstances that would demand some explanation for the reader to understand things better. A glossary is included at the end of the book, but I thought I could get most of the specific vocabulary just by using the context. The alternate history developed here seemed believable enough to me, and I went with it without a problem.

The heroine’s an interesting morsel, too. She doesn’t keep her tongue in her pocket, yet she doesn’t go on a feminist rampage every ten pages (which might have become boring after a while), and finds way to cheat the system in order to get what she wants (which is much more clever and logical, consider the powers she’d be up against if she were to blatantly stand up more than she already does). She’s resourceful in many ways, and has managed to create her own little network of useful people—whom good Torian society would deem ‘scum’, but can all contribute to Kit’s schemes for her to get the information she needs. I also liked how she went about discarding magic as something that doesn’t exist, and to explain this through logics and scientific explanations, when the true reason is actually quite clearly hinted at… she’s just the only one who can’t see it, much as if she was standing in the eye of the storm.

My main quibble with this story is how there’s no real conclusion to it. I know books ending on cliffhangers is all the trend these days, but this is too much to stomach. It reads like the first part of a whole book, rather than like volume 1 of a trilogy. Although it seems the next books are due soon enough (every two months or so?), it makes passing fair judgment harder. I wished the author had solved at least one plotline here—and I don’t mean the romantic one (that one might’ve been best kept for later, actually).

I may rethink the mark I’m giving “Her Ladyship’s Curse” later on: the world’s really interesting, and I want to know what’s going on behind the scene. For now, I’m keeping it at a solid 3… Well, alright, 3.5.

Yzabel / July 7, 2013

Review: The Necromancer’s Apprentice

The Necromancer’s Apprentice by R.M. Prioleau

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

Jasmine Na’Darod lived a simple life with her parents and older sister on the family’s farm. She never strayed far from home until the ill-fated Blood Moon arose, basking the country of Caristan with a terrible, sickening drought.

When her mother falls ill, Jasmine and her family are forced to leave home in desperate search of a cure. During their journey, a series of tragic events will change Jasmine’s life forever.

With her former life shrouded and forgotten, Jasmine embraces a new path granted by an unlikely stranger, who, ironically, practices the Art of death and undeath.

As Jasmine is drawn to this enigma of a man, she soon realizes there is more to him than what she initially perceived — his true motives are beyond anything she could ever imagine…

Review:

A story I enjoyed in general, but I think it would’ve deserved to be a little longer, in order to develop the characters some more, as well as give more details about Jasmine’s apprenticeship per se.

The main problem I had with this story was Jasmine’s passiveness towards what happened around her. Her shutting off all emotions made her too bland, like a blank slate on which it’d be easy to write. Had she had a little more passion in her, it might have allowed for more development, for explanations about how she came to accept her new life—the latter was an abrupt change, after all, with a lot of disturbing events happening, and she went through those like a breeze. There was an abrupt shift in the middle of the book, that I wasn’t sure I really grasped: one moment, she was all resentful towards Dagg, then in the next chapter she talked about him as her beloved Master. This, in my opinion, would have needed more “showing” instead of “telling”, for readers to really feel how she went from one side to the other. I would also have liked to see more of the Master’s teachings.

On the other hand, I quite enjoyed the second part, and the themes explored through this novella. Necromancy is a fascinating subject in itself, because of the questions it raises. The narrative is often fraught with ambiguity: permeated with a dark, corrupted magic that demands “experiments” to be performed, yet hauntingly beautiful in many ways. Some descriptions may need editing, because they were just a tad too flowery and bordering on purple prose. But some others were strong and to the point, albeit in a gruesome way. Although we’re not shown much of the world in which the story unfolds, it’s alright, because we don’t actually need to know: the secluded cave and marshes are good things, providing readers with a definite focus on the characters. This is why I wished we could see more development on that side, for the setting itself is perfect in that regard.

I still don’t know whether I should give this book 2 or 3 stars. However, for now, I’m going to settle on 3 all the same: there’s definitely potential in this story.