Yzabel / November 13, 2005

Stuck On A Scene

From GettyImagesIt’s a weird and unpleasant feeling, especially when it’s a scene that is planned, and not an idea that has struck all of a sudden and “looks like a good one”. It makes writing become sluggish and a chore, yet I know I can’t just give up or switch to something else in a snap of fingers, else I may very well remain stuck for much, much longer.I have such a scene in my current work in progress. It’s an important enough one, where one of the main characters reveals what she knows to the two others. It’s a planned scene, that actually looked great in my outline, when I noted town its main points and what was going to be revealed. However, it feels like a bore to write now, mostly, I suspect, because I’m not sure by which end to take it.Read More

Yzabel / November 10, 2005

Of Noticing Details When Not Supposed To

This thought hit me yesterday, while watching an episode of Monk, and this is probably why I’m going to link this to mystery novels and other kinds of “investigation” stories. How noticeable is a detail for an untrained person? To which extent can we consider that our characters are able to notice certain types of details more than other types? Of course, there’s a difference to be made here between knowledge learnt from books/school, knowledge learnt from experience/training/practice, and knowledge that one can happen to have because they stumbled upon it at some point in their lives, without their career and social/familial situation explaining it. The latter is always the one that is the trickiest for me: what is acceptable, and what is just a deus ex machina mechanism chosen by the author as a convenient solution?Read More

Yzabel / November 7, 2005

Storyright – Story Planner

It’s only today that I’ve discovered this site, which is still in it beta version, but looks pretty interesting all the same: Storyright. From what I’ve seen of it, it’s a story planner that lets you write about your story, its themes, its plots and subplots, as well as fill out “character sheets” (the latter including various data fields: physical description, role in the story, education, likes&dislikes, etc). I’ve signed up for an account, although I haven’t toyed with all the functions yet, but all in all, this seems like a nice and free alternative to the expensive software out there such as Power Writer (which is good in my opinion, but I really don’t have 190$ to shell out for a planning software right now). Story outlines can also be exported as Word documents, so that your work isn’t totally dependent on the state of the server on which the site is hosted.So far, what bothers me with it is that it only seems to work as intended under IE, and that, well, you need to have an Internet connection to use it. For the rest, I haven’t tested it enough to tell. It looks like it refreshes fast, at the least.outline, planning, story, storyright, writing

Yzabel / November 6, 2005

Outlining, planning, writing

I probably mentioned this in passing a few times here: shall I go on with writing “depending on my inspiration”, or adopting a more thorough way of planning? I was never sure of what method would be best for me. Would I need to plan carefully, or just run with the inspiration? After a few weeks of trying to change my ways of doing, I’ve started to wonder if, in this like in many other aspects of my life and work, it’s not the middle ground that would work best. And recently, it occurred to me that the problem for me exists in two forms: I don’t need outlining for a short story, but I sure do for a novel.Read More

Yzabel / November 4, 2005

He Said, She Gasped, They Ejaculated: Dialogue Expletives

Ah, the sweet sound of dialogue, and of the many methods to present it in a lively fashion… What is it, then, that I see on the horizon? Is this the fear of using “said” too often, perhaps? Shall I replace it by more varied expletives?Although this is something I haven’t done too often when writing in French, I must admit that a few years ago, when I started to use English on the Web instead of only limiting myself to lessons and homework, I thought that all these expletives were great, that they added variety and flair to my dialogues. The simple “said” and “asked” words seemed too bland to my liking, and I was convinced that they could become boring way too soon, and should be replaced whenever possible.I think I was wrong.Read More

Yzabel / November 2, 2005

World-Detailing in Science-Fiction and Fantasy Stories

Due to having gotten up way too early for my own sake this morning, yet not being fresh enough to properly work on my NaNovel, I was sifting through my “How to…” book by Orson Scott Card again, and this is when I realized that he had at some point written something that sounded true: in works of sci-fi and fantasy, the way many authors depict the worlds they have created isn’t the same as the way an author in other kinds of fiction would do. Or, should I say, us readers don’t interpret it the classical way, and tend to read between the lines, perhaps.Read More

Yzabel / October 31, 2005

November Is At Our Door… What With The Blog?

I thought I’d make an entry about this. Tomorrow, NaNoWriMo starts, and you can expect me to be busy enough during the upcoming month. However, I’m not sure of how often I’ll keep the blog updated (and my other blogs as well; it all goes in the same basket). I’m not going to make a “will update on such-and-such days only, blah-blah” disclaimer, because I’m pretty sure I will have the opportunity to update more regularly than I thought, or less often, or at different times than I normally do… Not going to make a fool out of myself with a false statement. If I update, it means that I had the time, if I don’t, it means I didn’t have it.What is sure is that:

  • I’ll do my best to keep things updated more than only once every two weeks.
  • I can be a damn fast writer when I need to, trust me. I may actually end up becoming a power engine with words shooting out of my fingers at light-speed. The downside is that I’ll probably not edit, nor even re-read anything, so expect typos.
  • I may go the road of short posts, instead of long essays. These will likely resume in December.
  • Long live the laptop, the WiFi and the 20m CAT 5 cable that allows me to write wherever I want to in the house, including the cellar, and bathroom, and even in front of a movie. No, I won’t be asocial, only multi-tasking!

This said, good luck to every NaNo participant. Thanks goodness November 1st is a national holiday here, this way I can start like a rocket.blogging, NaNoWriMo, posts, updating

Yzabel / October 30, 2005

The NaNo Playlist Is Here

Time to change the radio’s contents again. These are a few of the songs and instrumental pieces I’ve gathered to keep me inspired not only during November, but also while preparing the outline, working on the characters, etc.The novel’s genre is sci-fi with a healthy dose of cyberpunk, so let’s not be too surprised at the choice of songs (even though not all of them will suit fast-paced scenes: I have a few quiet moments in it, too).Read More

Yzabel / October 27, 2005

Character Conversations – I

Where the author meets two of her lead protagonists face to face to discuss their future…Damn characters who can never stay quiet, and always need to rant, argue, and demand me to take them to other directions than planned at first! Alright, so this is the product of a late-night writing session, after a fiery battle with myself to rework certain parts of the story. Both of them were involved, so the following dialogue is sort of what got out of it.(Their language isn’t especially well-mannered, nor is mine, for that matter. Not when I argue with my characters.)Read More

Yzabel / October 26, 2005

A Little Tool To Backup A LiveJournal Blog

What I’m going to point at today is LJ Book.I’ve discovered it earlier on this morning, and thought it’d be interesting to share it. While one of the aims of this tool is to generate a PDF of all the posts on a LiveJournal blog (in order for the blog owner to publish it using LuLu or another POD service), another one is the backup of one’s posts. Yes, I do have a small blog on LJ, that I really use for personal purposes only, and it’s good to have a trace somewhere of what I’ve written, in case it someday disappears—which will surely happen sooner or later: nothing on the Internet is truly immortal.If you’re anything like me, you probably dislike not having this level of control on your own words/webpages. With WordPress or any system that you host on your website, it’s of course easy to backup the database, but what about LJ or other services that don’t offer this function? No more worrying or saving the HTML pages one by one! The output isn’t schmancy-fancy nor full of user pictures and colors, but the text is safe, and it’s what matters.backup, blogging, livejournal, PDF, POD, writing