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Yzabel / August 17, 2012

Review: Entangled

My rating: [rating=4]

Summary:

Two months after dying, seventeen-year-old witch Graylee Perez wakes up in her twin sister Charlene’s body.

Until Gray finds a way back inside her own body, she’s stuck being Charlene every twenty-hour hours. Her sister has left precise instructions on how Gray should dress and behave. Looking like a prep isn’t half as bad as hanging out with Charlene’s snotty friends and gropey boyfriend.

The “normals” of McKinley High might be quick to write her behavior off as post-traumatic stress, but warlock Raj McKenna is the only person who suspects Gray has returned from the dead.

Now Gray has to solve the mystery of her death and resurrection and disentangle herself from Charlene’s body before she disappears for good.

***Entangled is a young adult paranormal fantasy romance suitable for ages 15 and up.***

Review:

Although I had to spread the reading of this book over two days, it went fast and smoothly, and turned to be highly addictive. The first chapters may have been a little slow—what was needed, I suppose, to set the backdrop for Gray and Charlene’s ‘ordinary’ life, and thus contrast Gray’s sudden death against it. But past that point, I was hooked. Firstly because of the themes tackled throughout the story: revenge, deception, resentment, grief, death, how do people cope with it and to what lengths would they be ready to go if they had a chance to have a beloved one back… Secondly, while those themes are of the dark kind, the narrative itself doesn’t feel desperate nor gloomy, therefore making for a lighter reading moment no matter what. Last but not least, because I wanted to know how things would unfold, all that simply (already suspecting the kind of outcome the author would come up with didn’t detract from my reading pleasure: it’s the kind of predictable I appreciate).

The characters were both archetypal for that kind of novel (the popular bitchy sister, the nice and hard-working one, the boy with a bad reputation but a heart of gold, the sidekick ready to do everything for the one he has his eyes on…), yet at the same time convincing enough. They behaved with the kind of intensity in feelings and actions that tend to seem fitting for teenage characters, and there were often some darker, secret areas to their personalities. After all, when the girl intent on snagging her boyfriend back is also a witch, can things really go as normally as they would if she wasn’t? When she’s jealous of someone, and want to hamper that someone’s efforts, why stop at just feeling frustrated? And yet, some of those traits may also become understandable: I can understand how suddenly having her dead sister snatch her body one day out of two, putting a regular dent in her life, may feel extremely hard to bear for Charlene. (Alright, this said, she was still an absolute bitch who deserved to be slapped around with a trout full of long, pointy nails. Seriously. Borderline psychopathic much?)

I also liked that the story followed not only Gray, but Raj as well. He was by far my favourite character, being an actual good guy, respectful of others, even though he kept entertaining a facade that in the end hurt himself the most. (And Adrian. Why, Adrian, always full of smiles: I hope you do realize that you’re so creepy, man! And that I love it.)

What I was less satisfied with in “Entangled” was some unanswered questions. The reason to Gray’s death wasn’t so clear (not to mention that it was pretty stupid, to the point of little old me wondering if the ‘culprit’ didn’t act so dumb on purpose, knowing that of course it was just but an accident waiting to happen). And I admit I didn’t really understand what happened with Raj and his mother at the end—well, I *think* I understood, only that part went too fast for me to be certain I really did; more details about that (and the role of the Zippo lighter) would have been appreciated.

Nevertheless, I liked this book, and definitely want to read the next installment.

Yzabel / August 16, 2012

Review: City of Bones

City of Bones by Cassandra Clare

My rating: [rating=3]

Summary:

When fifteen-year-old Clary Fray heads out to the Pandemonium Club in New York City, she hardly expects to witness a murder — much less a murder committed by three teenagers covered with strange tattoos and brandishing bizarre weapons. Then the body disappears into thin air. It’s hard to call the police when the murderers are invisible to everyone else and when there is nothing — not even a smear of blood — to show that a boy has died. Or was he a boy?

This is Clary’s first meeting with the Shadowhunters, warriors dedicated to ridding the earth of demons. It’s also her first encounter with Jace, a Shadowhunter who looks a little like an angel and acts a lot like a jerk. Within twenty-four hours Clary is pulled into Jace’s world with a vengeance, when her mother disappears and Clary herself is attacked by a demon. But why would demons be interested in ordinary mundanes like Clary and her mother? And how did Clary suddenly get the Sight? The Shadowhunters would like to know. . .

Review:

As weird as it may seem, before reading this book, I had no idea who Cassandra Clare was, nor about her ties with the Harry Potter fandom. One of the first things I thought when reading the first chapters was that I could feel a strong HP influence in it, probably too strong (even in the family names: Lightwood/Rookwood). The whole Circle thing reminded me of the Death Eaters, Jace was enough of a blond jackass to smack of Draco, Simon might just have well have been Ron… I won’t list other parallels I drew, since they’d be spoilers, but I felt them nonetheless. This, I must said, irked me a little: not that I dislike J.K. Rowling’s series (on the contrary!), just because at first it seemed, well, too much like fanfiction turned into original fiction at the last moment. This sometimes detracted me from the story’s intrinsic values, and it was too bad (probably, also, what partly explains why I’m not giving it a higher grade).

On the other hand, I still managed to enjoy “City of Bones” in the end, so there are clearly good things about it.

The story is pretty much built along traditional plot lines, that anyone familiar with Campbell’s “journey of the Hero” will likely recognize, because they’re as old as humanity itself. Some may be bothered by this, some may like it, some may not care. As far as I’m concerned, as long as it works in terms of storytelling, I enjoy that. And it worked here, so it’s all good for me, even though it makes it a little easier to predict where things are going (for instance, “J.C.”: alright, who couldn’t see at least that one coming?). It also worked in HP, by the way. It’s not something that prevents me from enjoying a piece of writing. I found many interesting things in the novel as a whole, such as the beginning scene (among other things: the killers that nobody but Clary can’t see; the Shadowhunters who’re clearly not such nice guys; where all the non-human originate from). All in all, it was an entertaining read, meaning I didn’t have to think too much, wanted to see the plot progress, kept turning the pages, and thought at the end: “OK, I kind of what to pick up the second book.”

Oh yes, I forgot to mention the author’s writing itself, which I found good enough, even though she sometimes makes use of weird similes. ften the dialogues made me smile or even chuckle, and it was pleasant. (Yes, there were lighter moments in the darker plot; those are never a bad thing, in my opinion.)

Unfortunately, I was less than thrilled about the characters, whose main flaw was that they lacked substance. They’re likeable in their own ways, but didn’t feel ‘present’ enough throughout the story—as if the substance was here, underneath, but not fleshed out enough. I don’t think it has to do with the fact that they pretty much fit archetypes that are often seen in YA novels or TV series in general—I’m convinced that archetypes, if made deep enough, can be very interesting. It’s just that they struck me as bland at times. Jace often came too much as a jackass (oh, boy, you’re not as witty as you think you are, and no, you’re clearly not more witty than Simon, and putting him down all the time won’t make you appear more badasse). Isabelle seemed too cookie-cutter. Alec would’ve deserved more attention. Clary was a nice girl, but didn’t stand out more than the supporting characters (and I kept on wanting to smack her head because she was so blind to what was so evident from the beginning). Poor Simon was really played for the resident butt-monkey, when he’d deserve to be treated better. I think I liked Magnus Bane best; too bad he got only minimal screen time.

All in all, this novel was enjoyable. I’m quite tempted to go on reading “The Mortal Instruments”, or at least the next installment, because there *is* room for improvement, and it may very well still happen. In spite of what I didn’t like in it, it isn’t enough to drive me off the series.

Yzabel / August 7, 2012

Review: Crushed

Crushed by K.C. Blake

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Summary:

The Noah sisters rule Titan High with their beauty, brains, and magical powers. Each year they play a secret game: Crushed. The girls pick their targets carefully and blow enchanted dust into the boy’s faces, charming them, but this year Kristen makes a grave mistake. She chooses the wrong boy and almost dies that same day. Coincidence? Maybe. But something isn’t quite right about Zach Bevian. He doesn’t behave like a boy who’s been Crushed. He goes from hot to cold, from looking at her with contempt to asking her out on a date. She doesn’t know what to think. Does he hate her or is he truly falling for her? Is he trying to kill her, or is he trying to save her?

Review:

(Book provided through ARR #27 in the We ♥ YA Books! group, in exchange for an honest review.)

Although I didn’t find this book exceptional, it made me spend a good time. Its good sides managed to balance the peeves I had with it.

The characters were fun and pleasant to read about. While they appear as cookie-cutter high school caricatures at first (the bitchy twin-nice twin pair, the perfect popular girl, the tall, dark and scary guy with a bad reputation…), they all proved to be deeper and more complex people by the end of the novel, each with his or her motives to act the way they did. They had their strengths and weaknesses, and both of those played a role in how the story evolved. The relationship between Zach and Morgan was pretty touching, the ‘bad boy’ act being pretty much a way of keeping people at bay and protecting what was dearest to him. And I liked how Kristen managed to grow up emotionally and mentally, her experience allowing her to understand what she should do and not do.

The Crushed game itself (complete with rules stated at the beginning of the book) was intriguing, and has the potential to raise a lot of questions in the reader’s mind. As in, ‘would I be happy to have a boy obey my every whim like that’, ‘would I do it if I could’, ‘how would I react if I knew I had been under such a spell’… While those may seem evident to a mature audience, I think their answers aren’t so obvious no matter what, especially for younger readers. And I’m always up for anything that challenges people’s opinions and makes them reflect, whether they’re teens, young adults or older.

I found the plot to be not overly complex, but with enough twists and turns to keep me wanting to know who did what and who was influencing who in the end. There’s clearly a game of power and influence here, one that makes use of emotions and beliefs in order to deceive, and that’s why the relationships between the main characters were made all the more important: if it had only rested on paranormal means, it wouldn’t have been as interesting.

A few things prevented me from giving this novel a higher mark, though. First, I would really have wanted to read more about the Crushed game itself—to see more of the girls toying with people, perhaps, more of Kristen and Zack trying to fool each other, before falling in love. From the summary, I expected more in that regard. The first half of the story also had lengths, especially towards the middle. I also wondered about Kristen’s reaction during her ‘cold war’ with her sister (shouldn’t she have put up more of a fight, as the perfectionist and overachiever that she was, and not just give up like that on her reputation?). Finally, there were a couple of occurrences when I felt something was missing, and I had to read again to make sure it wasn’t my mind playing tricks on me (I’m thinking more particularly about a chapter that ends with one of the sisters telling the other “your aura is black”, which didn’t seem to bode well… but then, the next chapter, they’re sitting and talking together as if nothing had ever happened?)

That said, it’s a story that has a serious potential of appealing to younger audiences. I think age also affected my views on it: it’s the kind of book I’d have loved when I was a teenager, but am just feeling a little more detached from, now that I’m older. My actual grade would be more a 3.5 than 3/5.

Yzabel / August 4, 2012

Review: Sweet Blood Of Mine

Sweet Blood of Mine by John Corwin

My rating: [rating=4]

Summary:

From Mega Nerd to Super Stud.

Justin Case and women do not mix. Man boobs, a love of Kings and Castles, and being tight with the “nerd” crowd certainly don’t win him any points either. After rescuing Katie, his crush, it turns out she might not be the girl he thought she was, while Elyssa, the school’s Goth Girl, turns out to be more. Can high school get any more confusing?

Determined to improve himself, he joins a gym and meets a sexy girl that just oozes a “come hither, Justin” vibe. Until she attacks him in the parking lot, and Justin realizes she’s no ordinary girl but a being with supernatural speed and strength. After a narrow escape and an excruciating migraine headache, he wakes up with supernatural abilities all his own: speed, strength, and the ability to seduce every woman he sees.

While that might sound like the perfect combo for any hormonal teen, Justin is a hopeless romantic who wants his first time to be special. Is that too much to ask for? But he doesn’t know what he is or how to stop his carnal urges. One thing is clear: If he doesn’t find answers there are other more sinister supernaturals who would like nothing better than to make him their eternal plaything and do far worse than kill him.

Review:

I admit it took me some time to wrap my mind around the idea of a protagonist called ‘Justin Case’… yes, yes, I know, it’s a pun, I’m just not too fond of puns on characters’ names. Anyway, I managed to get over it after a while, and since I had never read anything by John Corwin before, I had no strong bias towards this book, which is always a good thing. Besides, the plot summary seemed interesting, and I always like to see male perspectives in such stories.

There were moments I smiled and chuckled, because the author’s packed his story with references to various ‘geeky’ elements—and I’m a glutton for cameos of all sorts. (I’m positive I even saw a Wheel of Time reference in there, about one of the very things that made me roll my eyes at the original books.) This all fits pretty well with the ‘nerd hero’ theme, and I appreciated that John Corwin made him think and react along such lines, because I feel it’s precisely the kind of comparisons and thoughts that’d come to Justin’s mind. And although there were moments, too, when Justin veered a little too much on self-pitying (I guess it’s no wonder, given what a train wreck his life has become), fortunately he regularly catches himself up and decides to act and keep his head high (and his sense of humour going) no matter what.

I enjoyed a lot of the characters, even secondary ones. The boys from the Goth gang, who even when things got tight in their group still stuck with Justin and didn’t just stop talking to him (which is something that could’ve happened in ‘high school politics’, from what I’ve already witnessed in real life). Elyssa, who was able to hold out her hand to someone who’s been trampled on, and to do it again in spite of the odds, and let’s not forget that she’s quite badass. Stacey, too, with her quirks and manners, not so much the evil character she could become, and pretty touching in her own ways. Well, alright, I didn’t care much for the average pupils at school (Katie and her friends were annoying), but this is probably on purpose—this is not where Justin’s true friends are meant to be.

I also liked the Overworld developed here. At the end of this first installment, we are far from knowing everything about it, but enough already has been revealed for readers to realize that there is strong support underneath to carry the plot. Vampires, for instance, aren’t just here looking cool, they have their own society, with their own politics and dissenssions. Same goes for sorcerers, and, I’m sure, other supernatural factions.

However, there are a couple of things I liked less in the book were, first, that the story seemed to drag a little around the middle—the hardest part in every book, in my opinion. It picked up again in the last third, and the end was great, but that middle part wasn’t so fun to read. The second thing was some aspects of the ‘nerd community’, and the corruption going on with football at school. It seemed to me like there was too much of a collection of clichés (fat geeks, rejected at school, you can’t be popular if you play LARPs, etc), and the teachers’ and administration’s attitude towards Justin and his friends was bordering on unbelievable (at least, the way it was shown made it appear so; I don’t doubt that such biases do exist in many places, though).

Other than that, I really enjoyed “Sweet Blood of Mine”, and will likely pick up the next novel in line.

Yzabel / July 25, 2012

Review: The Christmas Throwaway

The Christmas Throwaway by R.J. Scott

My rating: [rating=3]

Count on me to read season-themed stories at the exact opposite time of the year. I’m just like that. On the other hand, past midnight was still a good moment to give in to the sudden urge.

Short of his 18th birthday, Zach is thrown out of his home by his father after years of abuse, for the ‘crimes’ of being gay and not wanting to follow the career path said father has always laid out for him. As he finds shelter on a bench in a churchyard, dreaming of the perfect Christmas he never had, he is woken up by police officer Ben Hamilton, who decides to bring him home and shelter him, at least until he’s an adult in the eyes of the law. Zach is welcomed by Ben’s family, particularly his caring mother and spunky little sister, and slowly comes to realize that there may still be something ahead for him—that the dreams he had discarded could still come true someday. Far from the dire straits of his life on the streets, he can now face his fears, heal from his wounds, psychological and physical, and think about how to help his own little sister, who still lives his abusive father. All the while, Ben and his family and friends are here to help him and provide him with support, until the feelings between both men finally blossom for good.

I found “The Christmas Throwaway” to be a lovely story. Probably not too close to reality (unfortunately: there are such young people thrown in the streets in such circumstances, and our world could sure do with more gentle people like Ben and his family), and a little too sweet to my usual taste, but I didn’t really care about that in the end, which means suspension of disbelief worked well enough nonetheless. Anyway, what I wanted when I picked this ebook was a Christmas story (the whole ‘Christmas spirit’ and ‘Christmas miracle’), and it was exactly that. Zach was an adorable young man, nice and polite, who had been kicked so much that he was left with little to no self-confidence, and seeing him rebuild that little by little, thanks to the presence of friendly fellow human beings, was a very positive sight; I couldn’t help but root for this character no matter what. Ben did what so few people would (as evidenced by his brother’s initial reaction of instant wariness), and remained throughout the story a strong shoulder on which Zach could lean; at the same time, he also behaved very responsibly, refusing to take advantage on Zach’s frailty to get into his pants.

The one thing I really regret about this novel was its second part, which felt rushed and too short. The first part deals with the Christmas days themselves, and shows us how Zach gradually manages to open up and feel at ease with this nexw ‘family’ of his. But the rest of the book dealt with what happens over the span of the next two years—Ben clearly waiting for Zach to sort his problems before making a definite move—until finally getting to the part where both men can be fully together, physically as well. To be honest, by this point, I had mostly forgotten about any potential sex scene, because the emotional side was so cute and enjoyable that I wanted to see more of it. I think this story would have benefitted from more development here, giving the reader more time to see Ben and Zach’s relationship evolve once Zach had started not only rebuilding himself, but also making progress in his new life.

Yzabel / July 16, 2012

Review: The Hunger Games

The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins

My rating: [rating=4]

I’ve had the Kindle version of “The Hunger Games” sitting on my reader for a few weeks, and now that I finally got to read it, I’m wondering: why didn’t I do that sooner? The only reason I didn’t read this book in two days instead of one is probably that I’m staying at friends’ for part of my holidays; had I been left to my own devices, it probably wouldn’t have lasted that long. One thing I can’t deny it is that it’s definitely a page-turner.

The world in which the novel is set seems consistent. We don’t get to know everything about it, but life in Ditrict 12 was described with enough accuracy for me to feel what it must be like; same with the actual setting of the Hunger Games themselves, and the events that unfolded during them, each tribute having to survive not only the others, but also the natural environment—well, ‘natural’ inasmuch as it was crafted by the government, that is. As usual in dystopian novels, I want to know more about what led to such a government, and what happened to the rest of the world, and we’re not given information about that; however, I was still under the impression that this information was lying somewhere behind the scenes, and that the author had actually thought about it. I’m eager to see if books 2 and 3 will confirm this. (I don’t want a whole history book; just the feeling that the world is well-built, even if 90% of that building work is never actually used in the course of the story.)

I didn’t find the characters extremeely developed, but they were enough to make me believe in their presence, and enough to play the part I wanted to see them play. Mostly they showed themselves as sharp and resourceful, and even some that seemed like goners from the start proved that they were able to put on a fight of their own, in their own ways. Although I’m not sure yet about where the whole romance aspect is going to head, I liked how slanted it was: not insta-love, and with the underlying suspicion that it was all an act. (I bet it isn’t, not really, but Katniss seemed to be confused enough about it for me to wonder if she fell in love for real, yet believed she was only acting her part? Or did she act all along? Could such intensity be faked? The fact that she doesn’t get Peeta’s feelings until the end also adds to this twisted side of the romance. Besides, let’s not forget that in such situations of survival, sometimes instincts make people act differently than they would have in normal circumstances, and I think that this could be important here, too.)

The story itelf isn’t the most original per se; the concept of man-hunting isn’t new in writing, and it’s been seen more than once already. That said, even though it’s nothing new, and I suspected where it was going from an early time on, I still liked it, just as I liked the slight twist at the end of the Games. There are times when expecting something and seeing it happen just fills me with thrill; it was the case here. The characters also remain immersed into the action, without spending much useless time on wallowing in guilt, nor giving in to remorse at just the wrong moment. This isn’t always easy to pull. However, one thing I thought was missing, was some real confrontation between Katniss and someone she actually cared about. It seemed to me that conveniently enough, the painful choice of having to face one of her ‘allies’ was always removed from her. For instance, sooner or later she would have had to kill Rue, but she never had to make that choice. The same goes with the wasps or the berries: the direct act of killing was tempered by the ‘natural’ buffer put between killer and victims. Even the poisoning act was, somehow, a way of avoiding a direct kill. I know this is a YA novel, but it would have been even more powerful if once, just once, such a choice had had to be made, and things hadn’t been made ‘easier’ for Katniss in that regard.

Yzabel / July 3, 2012

Review: Matched

Matched by Ally Condie

My rating: [rating=3]

To be honest, I’m not sure how to rate this book, so I gave it an average mark. Let’s say, 2.5 to 3 stars.

I kept on putting it down, then taking it again to go on reading. Regularly, I felt like I was getting bored with the story, yet I still felt like I wanted to see it unwind. I think this was due to the characters, with whom I didn’t really feel a connection. I liked discovering what happened to them (even though it was predictable enough, in a way), and they had their good sides, but they just felt a little too dull to me. Neither good nor bad, neither very interesting nor utterly boring. Some of their reactions were a little ill-timed—among other things, Cassia paying attention to Ky just because of that one glitch seemed just a little too convenient to keep my suspension of disbelief totally intact; it would’ve been different had we been introduced to Ky a little earlier on, perhaps, and had we seen the heroine already paying some attention to him as a friend (as it is, he appeared as an almost complete stranger at first, when he was actually someone she had had contact with more than just once, if only at school or games).

Other sides of the novel also left me with mixed feelings. The Society depicted in it was both detailed and not detailed enough, with certain of its aspects coming in as unexpected—unexpected as in “wait, where did that come from?”. For instance, we are told about a war, and all of sudden it’s like some people seemed to knew all along and aren’t surprised at all; only after a while, it’s also like they don’t care anymore, or have forgotten about it. Was Cassia surprised by such news, or not? I couldn’t determine. I sure would’ve liked this element to be introduced sooner for the reader’s benefit.

And yet, I kept coming back to the book, wanting to read more. So I can’t say I disliked it. I just don’t know where to stand regarding it.

Maybe I’ll read the second installment. Maybe not. Even this I don’t know yet. It’s quite weird.

Yzabel / July 1, 2012

Review: Talented

Talented by Sophie Davis

My rating: [rating=3]

(The ebook was provided to me by the author herself, after I answered an ARR in the We ♥ YA Books! group.)

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed the world developed in Sophie Davis’s novel. While it seems to be divided into two clear camps at first, it soon appeared to me that the dichotomy was far from being so evident, and that factions and characters were bound to harbour secrets and hidden standards. The last chapters sure didn’t disappoint me in that regard. I also enjoyed discovering how the Agency works, what kind of jobs its employees perform, as well as how missions are carried—I like to see that such ‘details’ were taken into account. The use of varied Talents offer those agents diverse opportunities, and it was interesting to read about that.

The reason why I’m giving it 3 stars ‘only’ is that I was however left with a lingering feeling of frustration at the themes developed throughout the story. I would have liked to see more of Talia’s challenges regarding her job as a Hunter, her desire for revenge, the means she would employ to do so, the choice she had to make between saving herself or enacting her revenge… I understand that this novel is not a standalone, and that such aspects are likely to be developed in book 2 or 3—in other words, that they’re part of a bigger picture. That’s not what frustrated me. I simply thought, when I read the summary, that they’d be keynotes of the story, and in the end, I felt that they were put aside in favour of the developing love triangle. I think I’d have liked this novel best if the romance part had been left to grow in a more balanced way along what I had expected to read about.

The file also contained recurrent typos, such as inverted words and commas in weird places. Unfortunately for me, I’m too trained to notice those things, and they tend to quickly become annoying.

Other than that, I was glad to be handed out this ebook. I spent good moments reading it.